Assassin's Creed III

When someone thinks of the game "Assassin's Creed" they immediately think that it would be filled with blood (as seen in your background), but you've shown the depth of the story line within the game in your picture. Super imposing the 'Cosmos' with all of its wonders onto them while still allowing the feathers to be seen is intense! Add to that Eden's Apple at the center and you show that the true search within the game is not just for revenge, but for a greater knowledge of the world!

I was wondering if you meant for the heart to be seen. The belts that your subject is wearing come to a 'V' at his diaphragm while his hands are holding Eden's Apple at the top. When these two are taken together it doesn't take much to see a heart shape there.

If there was one thing that I dislike about the picture, it's the title! It's a decent title, but does not fathom the depth of your work! There are dozens if not hundreds of pictures out there that are called "Assassin's Creed III", but none that comes close to this. Do not undersell your art or your work by using a generic name! You deserve better!
Since your subject is holding the apple, has gained wings, and seems to be ready to embark on a spirit-walk through the cosmos, how about "AC 3 -Forbidden Fruit?" or "AC 3 - The Knowledge of Good and Evil' (just some examples)?

Overall, I am truly impressed by your work!
I enjoy the contrast in the colors, and like your use of light and shadows to draw the eyes in to the center. Once the eyes reach the 'apple', they catch the wings, and then notice what's within them. Finally they start to move around the character seeing his outfit in beautiful detail.

I've given you 5 stars in everything because you deserve them.
Vision - Even though I can't put it into words, I believe I can see what you were trying for.
Originality - Absolutely the most original piece of art I've seen dealing with Assassin's Creed.
Technique - (See my comments above about the feathers and 'heart-shape'.
Impact - This is a powerful picture that I would recommend to anyone whether they were an AC fan or not!

You've set the bar high for yourself and I hope to see more great things from you in the future!